I can't believe it took me until today to remember that I had this update sitting here, waiting for me.

Anyway - I LOVE JOHN. He's awesomeness, and you portrayed him awesome. I kept thinking that Alonso was really quick to take John's offer - then again, if you are hanging out with someone who looks like Jack and won't fuck him, and them someone who looks just as hot comes around, I wouldn't be waiting either. ^_^

Can't wait until next chapter. It shall be interesting and enjoyable at the same time, I'm sure. ^_^