epithalamium: (moony <3)
epithalamium ([personal profile] epithalamium) wrote in [personal profile] amuly 2011-04-06 03:55 am (UTC)

How many of my favourite things have you managed to include in this fic? ♥

1. Smoking. Do you smoke? Because your description of the smoke, Sirius lighting up the cigarette: dear me, I can just smell it. I love it when writers capture such a sensory experience so perfectly.

2. That scared feeling people get after they graduate. It's been four years since I've been at uni, but I can still remember the feeling so well: terrified that life won't get any better than it is now, terrified that it will. I'm so glad they have each other. (And of course, this is set in a timeline where Peter never betrays James, and Sirius and Remus grow old together.)

3. Sort of 4:00 rooftop meeting. I remember one author I love very much saying that '4 o' clock knows all my secrets', and it's like that here, except Remus is there for Sirius, Remus with his comfy jumper. :D

4. Rimming. Now that sounds like a good deal you made there, Messr Padfoot!

Can I love this any more than I do?

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