Ianto-seriousness: a thing that /everyone/ should be on the lookout for. It's a serious condition, lol. I love those little moments you put in your writing, like the Goldfish with Gwil. Makes it all the more realistic ^_^

And I love the idea of Jack being a product tester, lol. This entire thing is great. If I didn't have three minutes until my next class, I would list everything. As it is, entire thing will just have to do ^_^