Screw Loose

Jun. 7th, 2011 08:14 pm
amuly: (Charles/Erik)
[personal profile] amuly

Title: Screw Loose
Pairing:
Charles/Erik
Word Count:
747
Rating:
R
Summary:
Written for [livejournal.com profile] 1stclass_kink  meme: Anyone – losing control: I'd love a fluffier treatment of what it's like to lose some of the fierce control they all have to keep up. Specifically: Charles' blow-job giving abilities are apparently enough to make Erik lose control, and the men end up accidentally trashing a hotel room in the process.
Warnings: none
A/N:
SO MUCH X-MEN FIC. Eating my brain. Eating it, I say!


 

 

As Erik's orgasm crested he cried out, body straining up, up into Charles' persistent mouth. That mouth which was still sucking, dragging Erik's orgasm out of him with those full, red lips. Erik's body felt impossibly tense as he arched up, metals all around the room singing to him in harmonious ecstasy.

It was only once his thighs started trembling around Charles' head and his hands batted weakly at Charles' shoulder that the young man pulled away from him, grinning in satisfaction. “Good, then?”

Erik blinked, trying to bring Charles' face back into focus. “Good?” he chuckled. “Yeah, that was...”

Abruptly Erik stopped, Charles' face swimming into sharp relief. Floating in the air above Charles' head were dozens of metal screws of every shape and size. Erik cocked his head in wonder at the metallic halo outlining Charles' silhouette. “Huh.”

Charles' frown was only for a moment, and then he turned to the side and caught sight of some of the screws. “What on earth...”

Between one blink and the next the screws ceased their hovering, giving themselves over to the normal pull of gravity as they fell on top of Charles and around him, bouncing lightly on the rumpled bed and moldy hotel carpeting. Curious, Erik lifted his hand, drawing a screw eye-level with him as he examined it. Charles was doing the same with more traditional methods, picking up screws from his position straddling Erik's legs and peering at them. “Has this ever happened before?”

Erik shook his head. “My powers aren't usually out of my control when I'm happy. It's anger and pain that makes things like this happen, not...” His mouth twisted into a wry grin as Charles peered down at him, amused. “Well. Never this.”

Shifting on top of Erik's knees, Charles hefted a particularly large bolt in his hand. “Where did all of these come from, anyway?”

Erik shifted on the bed, not noticing its ominous creak. It had been creaking all night, after all. Closing his eyes, Erik breathed in slowly, trying to calm his so recently excited body and scan about for metal in the room. He could feel the holes the screws had come from: little whorls that contained trace filaments of the screws' metal, from when either he had unscrewed them just now, or when they were first screwed in who knows how long ago. There were empty screw spaces in the bathroom, in the floor lamp, in the desk, and... “Oh.” Erik suddenly went very still. “The-”

Before he could say it, the bed collapsed beneath both men, jarring them as it fell the foot or so to the ground. The frame splintered as the mattress fell, footboard collapsing with a loud crash into the floor. Before it could fall as well, Erik reached his hands up behind him and braced them on the headboard, holding it in place. Charles had moved to do the same in the same instant, and now he lay sprawled atop Erik's chest, hands brushing Erik's as they held the headboard in place.

Staring up into Charles' face, not inches from his own, Erik tried his best to look contrite. But then Charles was laughing, and Erik couldn't help but follow suit. As they both maneuvered themselves carefully from beneath the loose headboard, the sounds of other things crashing apart filled the room: the floor lamp tumbled to the ground, the desk following next in the wake of its reverberations. The loud crashing sound of breaking porcelain reached them from the bathroom just as Erik and Charles were easing the headboard down onto the mattress.

Charles was shaking his head as the two men sat naked on the edge of the mattress, surveying the damage around the room. “Most impressive,” Charles quipped.

Erik grunted. “Like I said: it's a first for me, too.” Peering down at the screws scattered around the mattress and floor, one of them suddenly struck Erik's curiosity. Mentally he lifted it, letting it float in front of him. It wasn't the same as any of the bed bolts, and too large to be from anything else, like the desk or floor lamp.

Abruptly Erik realized what the large bolt was from. “Charles, you might want to put on a dressing gown,” he cautioned.

Charles squinted at the suspended bolt, curious. “Why? Where's that one from?”

And then the hotel door fell in.



 

Followed you home from the kink_meme...

Date: 2011-06-08 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ss-ophelia.livejournal.com
to say that this is amazing, and thank you for being the first person to ever write one of my prompts.

Off to check out the rest of your undoubtedly fantastic fic!

Re: Followed you home from the kink_meme...

Date: 2011-06-08 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm rapidly filling out the amount of X-Men fic I've got, but FYI, there's not much of it yet. Soon to change, though! Soon to change! (I totally just finished another full fic and am about to start on yet ANOTHER one from the kink meme. Because THESE BOYS. :DDDD)

I'm honored to claim your awesome prompt! It was cute and perfect and just the right amount of vagueness that I felt free to try and do some awesome things ^.^

Re: Followed you home from the kink_meme...

Date: 2011-06-09 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ss-ophelia.livejournal.com
There's going to be more??? Excellent! I look forward to reading it.

Aww, thanks! I'm trying to work on my prompting skills. Hoping to build to writing my own fic. Someday!

Date: 2011-06-08 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kausingkayn.livejournal.com
Aha. And imagining him saying "Charles" in that accent....Mmmm. Yummy.

Date: 2011-06-08 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Oooo I just love it when they say each other's names. So sexy ^.^

Date: 2011-06-08 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kausingkayn.livejournal.com
Kayn thinks that should be your next one you pop out.....just saying....NOT THAT I SHIP THEM OR ANYTHING.

Date: 2011-06-08 02:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
MWHAHAHAHA :DDDD

And too late. I already finished writing one (posting at midnight, so as not to clog up the F-lists too much) and started another, so a name-fetish would have to be at least 3 fics out :P

Date: 2011-06-08 02:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kausingkayn.livejournal.com
Alrighty then. I think I can wait for three fics. :-D Specially if one is at midnight. Yays.

Date: 2011-06-08 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jchantilly.livejournal.com
This made me smile. Thank you.

Date: 2011-06-08 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Fantastic! Glad it did ^.^

Date: 2011-06-08 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rubynye.livejournal.com
That? Was adorable.

Date: 2011-06-08 02:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Awww thanks!

Date: 2011-06-08 04:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kesomon.livejournal.com
XD I am cracking up, this was brilliant.

Date: 2011-06-08 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked!

Date: 2011-06-08 07:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] auctorial.livejournal.com
Ahahahaha! This was fabulous. ♥

Date: 2011-06-08 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
<3s back atchya! ^.^

Date: 2011-06-08 05:22 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] subarashiine.livejournal.com
*LAUGHS* this is great!! <3

Date: 2011-06-08 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Glad you liked!

Date: 2011-06-08 06:27 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] etrangere.livejournal.com
lol that's cute!

Date: 2011-06-08 06:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Thanks ^.^

Date: 2011-06-08 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_profiterole_/
That's hilarious! :-)

Date: 2011-06-08 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Glad you liked ^.^

Just found you and had to say....

Date: 2011-06-09 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azryal.livejournal.com
This was FANTASTIC!!! In my head all I get are angsty, black clouds of sex and nothing this adorably sexy and funny. You are win.

Mae

Re: Just found you and had to say....

Date: 2011-06-09 02:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Hahaha. Yes, I tend to be fairly incompetent in the writing angst department, so it's kind of a trade-off.

I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 2011-06-09 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fatal-scribbles.livejournal.com
HAHAHAHAHAHA, this is amazing XD

Date: 2011-06-09 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Thanks! :D

Date: 2011-06-10 09:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aki-yasu.livejournal.com
XD This is hilarious and magnificent!! <3

Date: 2011-06-10 09:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked!

Date: 2011-06-11 05:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celemie.livejournal.com
OH WOW HELLO I LOVE YOU!!!!

THIS IS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG


(Sorry for spamming your comments, I just really like your storiessssssss rdkoughweoghoegh)

Date: 2011-06-11 05:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Never apologize for totally complimenting me every couple of minutes!! I'm just glad you're enjoying all my fic ^.^

Date: 2011-06-11 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adena-kaiba.livejournal.com
That's amazing. :D
Before reading it, I had no idea it would be that hilarious, sweet, and well-written.
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing!

Date: 2011-06-11 10:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Glad to see you were pleasantly surprised ^.^

Date: 2011-06-12 10:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] azarias.livejournal.com
Dying of lolz.

Date: 2011-06-12 04:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amuly.livejournal.com
Awesome ^.^

Date: 2011-06-14 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
AHAHAHHAAHAHAH THE LAST LINE ♥

Date: 2011-06-14 09:29 pm (UTC)

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